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This is a poem based on a part of one story I'm writing. Not too sure on it to be honest. +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Intricate detail might be a little too much ...

Wow, I love how you can feel the emotion in it. Keep up the good work! -Rick

It's a really good poem. I don't like how the rythm kind of died in it, but I liked it still. Keep up the good work! -Rick

This is pretty good. Keep up the good work! -Rick

This needs to be fixed. Keep up the good work! -Rick

This is absolutly amazing. Keep up the good work! -Rick

let’s be honest here. no one’s looking. so, I think I just might be in love with you. but I’m not certain – it’s just this feeling I have. Do ...

I really like this Via. Keep up the good work! -Rick

Hello my angel. Thou that shall save me from deluding my seams, Tarnishing the skin that protects my innocence, So fragile and alone, cruelly empty to the touch Sensitive, unearthly, ...

Really good poem! Keep up the good work! -Rick

The reins of reason may have slipped Momentarily from my grip. I wasn't worried, it was not the first time It would not go too far - I never do. ...

O_O Very good poem. I loved it. Good rythm, good words. It's amazing. Keep up the good work! -Rick

This is an excellent poem! I really like this. Keep up the good work! -Rick

*Found this in a bottom drawer. Not sure whether it's a touch too confessional and/or pretentious. Comments? breath held the world may quiet, still. Unzip these eyes. Douse with color ...

The rhythm is kind of strange, but I'm hoping you still like it! I sit and stare. I hem and haw. I rub my aching head. The moment that I ...